Another walk with Grathr

[Grathr]

I went for another walk today. Strangely the text came to me in the shape of a (bad) poem...
Here goes...


Hello there, I have a story to tell.
Its about a periless adventure, but dont worry, it ends well.


It was a early autumn morning, and I heard the mountains call.
I found my map,  and picked a peak so high, it rised many hundred feet tall!


I grabbed my gear and off into the unkown I set off.
This would be an adventure worthy of the best, maybe even David Hasselhof!


Up and up it went, on slippery rocks and narrow paths. The rain falling stedily.
This is hard work, I thought.  I should have brought a sherpa.  just like Edmund Hillary!


Oh what is this! I looked to the ground!
On the path in front of me a giant footprint I found!


What could it be? A beast! Maybe a i giant goose?
Oh wait!  It was just the footprint of a big moose!


I trudged on, onwards towards the top.
And suddenly I was there, the world laying before me like salad in the shop!


Sandwiched between clouds. surly,  I must be the first one to reach this peak!
But then I discovered the tower, and my dreams of fame began to bleak.


On the tower there was a box, and a book I found in it.
It contained all the names of all that had before me reached the summit!


And then I discovered that a woman had been there right before me. At this early hour!
Someone call S.H.I.E.L.D, she can not be human!


The rain continued to fall, and under a pine I found shelter.
There dripping wet my lunch I ate. Knowing that this silly adventure and poem was over.


























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[Grathr]

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[ducttapetech]

I don't like poetry, but that was great!
Nice pics and thanks for sharing Gaute.

That's us mobile.
Nate

[Grathr]

I don't like poetry, but that was great!
Nice pics and thanks for sharing Gaute.

That's us mobile.
Nate

Thanks!
Im not sure I believe you about the silly poem thoug



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[SAK Guy]

Great pix!!!  Good use of both conventional and slant rhyme in your poem. 

Thank you!!!

[ducttapetech]

Now you should believe me, SAK "G" knows his smurf when it comes to Lit and poems.

That's us mobile.
Nate

[Grathr]

Thank you both!


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[SAK Guy]

Thank you both!


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You're welcome and know this my friend, the spontaneous poem that springs from the heart is a deep expression of feeling...it should never be critiqued but taken as it was intended, as a shared communication of the moment.

 

[SAK Guy]

Now you should believe me, SAK "G" knows his smurf when it comes to Lit and poems.

That's us mobile.
Nate

Thanks Nate...I now have my stage name when I start rapping!   

[Grathr]

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[Grathr]

Thank you both!


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You're welcome and know this my friend, the spontaneous poem that springs from the heart is a deep expression of feeling...it should never be critiqued but taken as it was intended, as a shared communication of the moment.

 

It was meant to be funny.
But I guess I had the most fun writing it


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[SAK Guy]

Thank you both!


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You're welcome and know this my friend, the spontaneous poem that springs from the heart is a deep expression of feeling...it should never be critiqued but taken as it was intended, as a shared communication of the moment.

 

It was meant to be funny.
But I guess I had the most fun writing it


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Yes   I know and it was wondrous and how joyful you must (wait, need another hit)..... .......cough, cough........ok where was I?



Criminey, I'm hungry.   

[ducttapetech]

Now you should believe me, SAK "G" knows his smurf when it comes to Lit and poems.

That's us mobile.
Nate

Thanks Nate...I now have my stage name when I start rapping!   

No probs Sak G! Just trying to hook a homie up.

That's us mobile.
Nate

[ducttapetech]

Thank you both!


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You're welcome and know this my friend, the spontaneous poem that springs from the heart is a deep expression of feeling...it should never be critiqued but taken as it was intended, as a shared communication of the moment.

 

It was meant to be funny.
But I guess I had the most fun writing it


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Oh it was funny! That is one of the reasons why I like it.

That's us mobile.
Nate

[Grathr]

Thank you both!


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You're welcome and know this my friend, the spontaneous poem that springs from the heart is a deep expression of feeling...it should never be critiqued but taken as it was intended, as a shared communication of the moment.

 

It was meant to be funny.
But I guess I had the most fun writing it


Sent from a device made from star dust using tapatalk

Yes   I know and it was wondrous and how joyful you must (wait, need another hit)..... .......cough, cough........ok where was I?



Criminey, I'm hungry.   

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[kirk13]

Thank you Gaute,I read this on the train home from work. It was paradise to see the woods,and deer trods after having spent the day in a citadel of consumerism!

[zoidberg]

Another cool thread.    I quite like this pic. 

[Grathr]

Thanks!
(The white stuff that looks like water is a thick fog layer.)

[Gareth]

It may fall just a little short of being a Viking saga, but I still enjoyed it.

[Grathr]

Thanks!
Point taken: Not enough blood and death. Ill have to bring my bow and axe on the next one, and see what happens

[zoidberg]

 

[Gareth]

Thanks!
Point taken: Not enough blood and death. Ill have to bring my bow and axe on the next one, and see what happens

That's the spirit.

[Gerhard Gerber]

I know you have to live with cold and other nasty weather I don't even know about, but man sometimes those pics make me jealous........

[comis]

Looks like a great outing with good fun, great presentation too!  Thanks for sharing! 

[Grathr]

Thanks guys!