Sweety and I are just halfway through, but you seem aspiring to retail an unexpected journey Your style reminds me of JRR Tolkien, if I may say so! But there are some repetitions one could smooth out (You often write "little pocket knife", maybe vary by dropping Little or pocket once in a while, or find another description)But all in all very entertaining and we will finish it tomorrow!
I wrote it just for yuks. Just little short story about a SAK and how it's a useful thing to have.